The word "his' was used too many time in just one short paragraph.
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07/08/2012, 12:42:54




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He approached the militiaman and detonated his explosives, killing his target as well as his wife, three of their teenage children, his brother and another relative, said the official. He could provide no other details including the number of wounded.

Had you not pointed it out, I would not even know because I was reading carelessly. To me, it is a lot harder than an English Reading Comprehensive Class that I took while in college.

 

 

 






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